EvilCat
Вот из-за этой двойственности я вопрос и задал!
Arseny
Моя вина, признаю! Я обычно даю контекст, но в данном конкретном случае не усмотрел в нём ничего, что могло бы помочь в переводе! Вот полный абзац текста:

Creatures: Coryl has many undead guardians and minions. The most dangerous minion, of course, is Lashandra, Zabados's cousin. During the day while Coryl sleeps, Lashandra patrols the waters surrounding the dome. At night, she rests for a few precious hours but spends the rest of the time inside the dome attending to Coryl's needs or providing her an audience for her unholy sermons.
Seven sharks patrol the waters around the mound. Of these, one is Coryl's animal companion, and the other six are wild sharks she has befriended. Inside the mound, Coryl's lair is defended by four aquatic ogre skeletons and a zombie giant crocodile. These undead lurk in the seaweed and attack anyone not accompanied by Coryl, Lashandra or Zabados. The mermaid vampire herself lurks in the southern reaches of the grotto, but sometimes lounges on the roof during night low tides to stargaze.
Coryl is a hauntingly beautiful mermaid, with long, thick, blood-red hair woven with strings of shells and pearls. Her skin is a pale silver in hue, deepening to a brilliant scarlet on her fish-like tail. She uses her skill in disguise to hide her sallow complexion and murderous shark-like fangs. She takes great delight in tormenting her prey with horrifying tales before feeding from them, Although she has several undead minions, she's somewhat wary about creating more vampires or vampire spawn, since this would increase the number of victims she needs to pluck from the surrounding region, thus increasing the chances of her being discovered. Nevertheless, she has been entertaining the concept of rewarding Lashandra's service with eternal unlife. Lashandra is a grim-looking aquatic elf with mostly blue skin except for patches of white on her shoulders and back. Her shoulder-length green hair is wild and unkept, and a dangerous, almost sadistic gleam shines in her eyes. Her time spent under Coiyl's domination has enhanced her cruelty. Unlike Zabados, Lashandra has recently deduced Coryrs true nature. and is darkly intrigued by the prospect of becoming a vampire herself.

Ребята, да мне и не нужно их переводить!
Их уже студия "Фантом"перевела! У меня вопрос совсем не о том, как этих монстров переводить! 

Спасибо!
Только рыжеволосый вампир рвёт мне все шаблоны!
Уж скорее у неё красные волосы!

1. Although she is evil, Coryl does not necessarily immediately attack intruders. Given time and at least a few minutes of advance warning (which is the case if Zabados is still dominated), she slips out of hiding to welcome them to her abode. - ?
2. Although she has several undead minions, she's somewhat wary about creating more vampires or vampire spawn, since this would increase the number of victims she needs to pluck from the surrounding region, thus increasing the chances of her being discovered. - Запутался я в этой фразе...

astion
А мне, честно говоря, второй вариант больше нравится!

Спасибо!
Coryl is a hauntingly beautiful mermaid, with long, thick, blood-red hair woven with strings of shells and pearls. Her skin is a pale silver in hue, deepening to a brilliant scarlet on her fish-like tail. - ?

Спасибо!
Наверно, переведу как "ускоренный лагерь Элли"...

1. He said nothing, but let himself in to the third floor stairwell with a key, and no one saw him leave - ?
2. All that remains of the ruins is a low shoal of stone that protrudes from the surface at low tides. - ?

Ну, понизилось у персонажа Телосложение, и от этого пропали хиты. Он восстановил Телосложение- хиты вернулись?

Доброго времени суток!
Пара вопросов с последней сессии!
1. Ужасный смех Таши кастуют на летящее существо. Падает ли оно на землю?
2. Персонаж восстанавливает утраченное Телосложение? Восстанавливаются ли у него от этого хиты, утраченные в результате потери Телосложения и где об этом говорится, если говорится?
Заранее спасибо!

ballkrusher
Спасибо!
Только "под откос" - слишком сильная ассоциация с поездами, лучше напишу "наперекосяк"!
1. Zabados has been seen on several occasions around town with a mysterious tall, slender woman. - в городе?
2. . The vampire uses the two aquatic elves as living minions to attend her interests in Marsember and beyond without exposing herself to undesirables. - ?

Что-то мне кажется, что самый простой способ борьбы с ворами-заклинателями - отбирать у всех заклинателей при входе в город книги заклинаний, свитки и реагенты!

Спасибо!
Under the bed is a small, silver shirt button set with slivers of jade - Под кроватью находится маленькая серебряная пуговица от рубашки, в которую вставлены осколки нефрита?

Спасибо!
ballkrusher
"- Пусть станет не только символом беззаветной любви города к своему гражданину...
- Лучше сказать: "К своему великому сыну".
- Лучше." 

1. Constable Truesil (LN human female Ariz/Exp6) is a sober woman just entering her middle years, with graying blonde hair and deceptively soft brown eyes. - только входящая в средний возраст?
2. The marshy region is riddled with sand bars, and Marsember guards the primary river channel into Cormyr's interior with a fleet of a dozen royal warships.  - охраняет что?

Спасибо!
1. And now, Delthrin has found someone who may just be able to help him realize his dreams. - И теперь Делтрин нашёл кого-то, кто как раз способен помочь ему реализовать его мечты?
2. Cormyr has a unique method of encouraging and controlling) the adventuring lifestyle—all adventuring groups who wish to explore dungeons, fight dragons, or otherwise risk life and limb in the more dangerous regions of the nation must secure a royal charter. Securing a charter requires an initial payment of 1,000 gp and a yearly renewal fee of 300 gp. A successful Diplomacy check (DC 30) decreases the initial payment to 500 gp. Charters can also be granted to adventuring groups as a reward for service to the nation. A charter can cover up to 30 but most only cover groups of four. An adventuring group without a charter quickly finds that the authorities in Corrnyr are much more difficult to deal with. Any Bluff, Diplomacy, or Gather Information checks made against Cormyrian officials suffer a –6 penalty if the adventurer's name is not registered on a royal charter. Conversely, registered adventuring groups gain a +2 circumstance bonus on these skill checks Wavy display their royal charter at the time. Another benefit of registering with the government is less tangible. Since government officials track the strengths and weaknesses of chartered adventuring groups, they know which ones are right for specific tasks. When a group with a charter enters a Cormyrian city and the local government has a job that suits their skills, an official soon contacts the group with a job offer. Chartered adventurers rarely want for employment in Cormyr. -?

Cпасибо!
He considers himself the ultimate pragmatist, striving to make something useful out of a discarded resource — dead flesh and bone. "Waste not, want not' is his mantra, and he envisions a day when every home can buy, sell, and trade tireless undead servants, controlled by a simple magical device that anyone can use. - ?

Хм, я думал, что тут имеется в виду, что им там позволили остаться...
Спасибо!
Delthrin is amused by his reputation and the fear it engenders in locals, as he feels it both enhances his infamy and helps protect his privacy. - ?

Доброго времени суток!
Помогите разобраться с Ioun stones!
1. Правильно ли я понял, что они не занимают место на теле, так что их можно носить вместе со шлемом?
2. Правильно ли я понял, что их можно носить несколько, и получать от этого все их бонусы, при условии, что камни разные?